Thank you very much! I hope the work gets easier...
The whole 'reality optional' parts were some of the things I was meaning to emphasize, really. We accept them because we know what's going on and understand. To someone who doesn't understand so much of the series has got to look _so weird_.
I was trying to not sound sarcastic and openly ironic with Gozaburo. I suspect I failed. I mean, it's ironic because we know what it was really like, but it was suppose to sound like it was sincere.
Yes, Mokuba's needs work. That's been pointed out to me...Poor kid's just so hard to write about, and I couldn't pick a pov for his. Probably a teacher or adult, since I've already covered the, "He must have it all" with his brother's.
I'm glad you enjoyed them, and hope you're not killed by work. I'd be much upset.
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Date: 2008-04-12 07:57 pm (UTC)The whole 'reality optional' parts were some of the things I was meaning to emphasize, really. We accept them because we know what's going on and understand. To someone who doesn't understand so much of the series has got to look _so weird_.
I was trying to not sound sarcastic and openly ironic with Gozaburo. I suspect I failed. I mean, it's ironic because we know what it was really like, but it was suppose to sound like it was sincere.
Yes, Mokuba's needs work. That's been pointed out to me...Poor kid's just so hard to write about, and I couldn't pick a pov for his. Probably a teacher or adult, since I've already covered the, "He must have it all" with his brother's.
I'm glad you enjoyed them, and hope you're not killed by work. I'd be much upset.
Thanks again!
S