I don't even know where to begin. I've been mindcrushed in the best of ways.
This—everything, the whole thing—was so worth the wait. I can’t even begin to tell you how amazing Dimitri is. Our little brainchild is starting to become clearer! This is such a momentous occasion! –Holds up her cup of tea and sheds a little tear.- Dimitri Konstantinov is such a perfect, such a bitterly ironic name for him. I don’t think we could have come up with anything better. It is so him. Dimitri’s characterization was just…what I expected, and yet so much more. The lust and the coarseness and the snide confidence and the fuck, I want you now and the desperation evident in the small flashbacks you gave were just perfect. So, so perfect—so Dimitri.
You were worried about writing Dominic. I see that, but the only reason that is evident to me is because I am an unrestrained fanpoodle and know entirely too much about this band. Overall, you did a superb job in his characterization. You don’t know much about him—other than what I’ve told you, and most of that is LOL PRINCESS DIVA DOM METROSEXUALITY FAFF BAG SKINNY JEANS MOISTURIZER HE’S SO FAR IN THE CLOSET HE’S IN NARNIA—so of course writing for him must’ve been a stretch, but you executed his character very well. I can’t quite see Dominic falling asleep after that kind of sex—I imagine it would just make him more pumped up, and he’d be eager for another go-around—but Dimitri’s a BAMF demon, so I see why you went in that direction. (Plus, it makes Dimitiri’s grand exit that much more easy…and the would-be-drabble was already at ~4000 words, so I’m glad you didn’t go ~overboard~. XD)
I’ll top, beautiful.”
Dominic shrugs, shifting to get comfortable on the desk. That was a very simple, yet smooth and effective way of getting around the whole, “Shit, who is going to top?” situation. I can see Dominic nonchalantly shrugging at such a question. I’m pretty sure he and Matt switch off, anyway. He probably wouldn’t care about the minor details, as turned on as he is at that moment.
Matthew James Bellamy turning red like a blushing bride. My life is now complete.
Like I’ve told you, I wasn’t expecting sex. I was expecting some serious making-out, but not sex. The sexual energy was very raw and potent, which fits Dominic, and—to a more extreme level—Dimitri. It was very well done. No fabrications or artsy words or emotion or over-thinking, just very raw and bare. It fit the atmosphere quite well.
“Then get on with it, before I get bored.” That is Dominic James Howard to a T.
And speaking of which, cherry-flavored lip balm?—nice. The man moisturizes like no one’s business, and I’m sure he strives to keep his lips ~properly kissable~ at all times because he never knows when Matt’s going to back him into a corner and say flat out, “Fuck this. Let’s shag.
Dominic whimpers desperately as he arches his back, whispering with eyes closed and hands clenching, “Matthew, please.” like it’s a prayer or a mantra… Easily one of my favorite parts of the entire ficlet—mirrors a lot of my writing style, actually. I like that you managed to still bring it back to Matt. I admit, I was a bit worried when Dom gave into the sex so willingly when he’d just helped Matt get off, but that one line managed to sort of knot everything together—while simultaneously insulting Dimitri. And then later, Dimitri shoots back with, ”Can your guitarist do that?” PFF. Such a simple, childish remark, but gives so much insight into Dimitri’s intricate personality. A+, my dear.
One thing I don’t quite understand is why Dimitri changes his appearance. He’s thinner, bonier, and gives himself short hair. That reminds me of Matt. Did you do that just to get past security?—or did you intentionally give him more Matt-like features for Dom’s sake?
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Date: 2010-05-31 03:14 am (UTC)I don't even know where to begin. I've been mindcrushed in the best of ways.
This—everything, the whole thing—was so worth the wait. I can’t even begin to tell you how amazing Dimitri is.
Our little brainchild is starting to become clearer! This is such a momentous occasion! –Holds up her cup of tea and sheds a little tear.-Dimitri Konstantinov is such a perfect, such a bitterly ironic name for him. I don’t think we could have come up with anything better. It is so him. Dimitri’s characterization was just…what I expected, and yet so much more. The lust and the coarseness and the snide confidence and the fuck, I want you now and the desperation evident in the small flashbacks you gave were just perfect. So, so perfect—so Dimitri.You were worried about writing Dominic. I see that, but the only reason that is evident to me is because I am an unrestrained fanpoodle and know entirely too much about this band. Overall, you did a superb job in his characterization. You don’t know much about him—other than what I’ve told you, and most of that is LOL PRINCESS DIVA DOM METROSEXUALITY FAFF BAG SKINNY JEANS MOISTURIZER HE’S SO FAR IN THE CLOSET HE’S IN NARNIA—so of course writing for him must’ve been a stretch, but you executed his character very well. I can’t quite see Dominic falling asleep after that kind of sex—I imagine it would just make him more pumped up, and he’d be eager for another go-around—but Dimitri’s a BAMF demon, so I see why you went in that direction. (Plus, it makes Dimitiri’s grand exit that much more easy…and the would-be-drabble was already at ~4000 words, so I’m glad you didn’t go ~overboard~. XD)
I’ll top, beautiful.”
Dominic shrugs, shifting to get comfortable on the desk.
That was a very simple, yet smooth and effective way of getting around the whole, “Shit, who is going to top?” situation. I can see Dominic nonchalantly shrugging at such a question. I’m pretty sure he and Matt switch off, anyway. He probably wouldn’t care about the minor details, as turned on as he is at that moment.
Matthew James Bellamy turning red like a blushing bride. My life is now complete.
Like I’ve told you, I wasn’t expecting sex. I was expecting some serious making-out, but not sex. The sexual energy was very raw and potent, which fits Dominic, and—to a more extreme level—Dimitri. It was very well done. No fabrications or artsy words or emotion or over-thinking, just very raw and bare. It fit the atmosphere quite well.
“Then get on with it, before I get bored.” That is Dominic James Howard to a T.
And speaking of which, cherry-flavored lip balm?—nice. The man moisturizes like no one’s business, and I’m sure he strives to keep his lips ~properly kissable~ at all times
because he never knows when Matt’s going to back him into a corner and say flat out, “Fuck this. Let’s shag.Dominic whimpers desperately as he arches his back, whispering with eyes closed and hands clenching, “Matthew, please.” like it’s a prayer or a mantra… Easily one of my favorite parts of the entire ficlet—mirrors a lot of my writing style, actually. I like that you managed to still bring it back to Matt. I admit, I was a bit worried when Dom gave into the sex so willingly when he’d just helped Matt get off, but that one line managed to sort of knot everything together—while simultaneously insulting Dimitri. And then later, Dimitri shoots back with, ”Can your guitarist do that?” PFF. Such a simple, childish remark, but gives so much insight into Dimitri’s intricate personality. A+, my dear.
One thing I don’t quite understand is why Dimitri changes his appearance. He’s thinner, bonier, and gives himself short hair. That reminds me of Matt. Did you do that just to get past security?—or did you intentionally give him more Matt-like features for Dom’s sake?