Like I had said - there was originally an entire fic about that cop, but it was horrible and I never finished it. (The cop went on to investigate Pegsy's death and Ghouls.) It was the first in the recurring theme I mentioned. And I wanted to show Seto as someone outside shows him - not through Yuugi's forgiveness or Jou's distrust.
I've since finished drafting the fan pov one - I think I'll make it gangsters instead, because of what you mentioned. It would probably be a sensitive subject for many, and gangsters work better anyway. (After all, Kaiba corp. probably made some weapons smaller than bombs, after all. And Kaiba corp. weapons were damn good.) The end of that one currently reads, "Making games for a living, being richer than the rest of the country combined, knowing martial arts and dealing with bloodthirsty gangsters with confidence and a smirk. Oh yeah. Kaiba was _cool._"
I'm actually not done with those two... Yuugi's just never inspired my muses very much - great guy, but I have a hard time writing about him. And I don't know much about HP Seto. I don't know what to say about either of them.
It could, really, I just don't know if I can pull more out of the situation. I thought it was a good one to end with - ending where everything starts. In my original idea, those last two paragraphs weren't there. But I added them because I thought it would be ironic emphasis to the event.
I'll work on finishing these soon...My muses have finally swung back to original fic, so I'm going to work on those for now.
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Date: 2008-02-11 10:28 pm (UTC)Like I had said - there was originally an entire fic about that cop, but it was horrible and I never finished it. (The cop went on to investigate Pegsy's death and Ghouls.) It was the first in the recurring theme I mentioned. And I wanted to show Seto as someone outside shows him - not through Yuugi's forgiveness or Jou's distrust.
I've since finished drafting the fan pov one - I think I'll make it gangsters instead, because of what you mentioned. It would probably be a sensitive subject for many, and gangsters work better anyway. (After all, Kaiba corp. probably made some weapons smaller than bombs, after all. And Kaiba corp. weapons were damn good.) The end of that one currently reads, "Making games for a living, being richer than the rest of the country combined, knowing martial arts and dealing with bloodthirsty gangsters with confidence and a smirk.
Oh yeah. Kaiba was _cool._"
I'm actually not done with those two... Yuugi's just never inspired my muses very much - great guy, but I have a hard time writing about him. And I don't know much about HP Seto. I don't know what to say about either of them.
It could, really, I just don't know if I can pull more out of the situation. I thought it was a good one to end with - ending where everything starts. In my original idea, those last two paragraphs weren't there. But I added them because I thought it would be ironic emphasis to the event.
I'll work on finishing these soon...My muses have finally swung back to original fic, so I'm going to work on those for now.
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