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That DN fic draft...
Nov. 7th, 2007 07:31 pmYeah, this is that fic I talked about last post. This is the very first draft, and thus probably doesn't make a lot of sense. I fixed a few things as I was typing, but not much. I switch tenses a few times, but the parts in past tense don't sound good in present, and the parts in present don't sound good in past. I don't know what to do...
Anyway. The draft.
Title: I have no idea.
Rating: PG13 to be safe
Pairing: Mild L/Light
Spoilers: Whole series, L's name, birthday, and series end in particular
Warnings: Slash, first draft, probably doesn't make much sense, odd style.
So yes. Point out what doesn't make sense and possibly how to fix the tense problem. (I wouldn't mind...) I'll edit it and post a better version.. later. Sometime.
Anyway. The draft.
Title: I have no idea.
Rating: PG13 to be safe
Pairing: Mild L/Light
Spoilers: Whole series, L's name, birthday, and series end in particular
Warnings: Slash, first draft, probably doesn't make much sense, odd style.
( Read more... )
So yes. Point out what doesn't make sense and possibly how to fix the tense problem. (I wouldn't mind...) I'll edit it and post a better version.. later. Sometime.
