Yeah, it's really long...I know. I'm considering splitting it up into chapters, but I've no idea how.

Thank you for pointing out the bit with Rebecca. I'm never entirely sure what's anime and what's manga...I don't have a complete set of either. I'm sure there's a list somewhere, I just haven't looked.

I've expanded Mokuba's a bit -he's kinda hard for me to write about. I'm not sure why. But I have added to it, and it will be posted with the final version.

Thank you very much!

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