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splinteredstar) wrote2007-11-05 04:14 pm
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My muses have the most ungodly schedules....
So, it was a little past midnight. I had gotten everything done, and was settling in for bed. Lights were off, and I was curled up under the covers, thinking about a story that
serria had written. (Lovely story. Halloween fic, too.) There was probably some of
edmondia 's Marrakesh floating around in there, too. At any rate, I was trying to go to bed.
At about fifteen, thirty after, the opening lines to a rather interesting story started running through my head. Now, I'm used to this, though it hasn't happened lately much, and keep a memo pad by my bed for such an occasion. So I sat up, turned on my reading lamp, and started writing.
I finished somewhere around one a.m.
It's a rather interesting fic - I'm not sure entirely what's up with it, aside from me getting the Death Note canon and my desire to have a certain rather dead character stay around ('cause it's more interesting that way) to work together. I think I found away around the lack of an afterlife in the DN universe, at least for the character concerned.
I also over-used dashes. I didn't change subjects as much as I usually do, but I had an idea of what I wanted to happen, so that helped. I did change tenses a few times, and didn't even notice. I don't usually do that, but I fixed them later so it doesn't matter much.
I'll probably type it later. It's kinda odd... Right. Friend is over and wants me to help her on Final Fantasy 6, so I'll probably type it tonight. *nods*
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At about fifteen, thirty after, the opening lines to a rather interesting story started running through my head. Now, I'm used to this, though it hasn't happened lately much, and keep a memo pad by my bed for such an occasion. So I sat up, turned on my reading lamp, and started writing.
I finished somewhere around one a.m.
It's a rather interesting fic - I'm not sure entirely what's up with it, aside from me getting the Death Note canon and my desire to have a certain rather dead character stay around ('cause it's more interesting that way) to work together. I think I found away around the lack of an afterlife in the DN universe, at least for the character concerned.
I also over-used dashes. I didn't change subjects as much as I usually do, but I had an idea of what I wanted to happen, so that helped. I did change tenses a few times, and didn't even notice. I don't usually do that, but I fixed them later so it doesn't matter much.
I'll probably type it later. It's kinda odd... Right. Friend is over and wants me to help her on Final Fantasy 6, so I'll probably type it tonight. *nods*
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That section of the note was written by Ryuk as a 'how-to' section of the note, possibly with notes added in by Light as he discovered things. No 'how-to' I've ever seen has ever changed from how to use the weapon (or whatever) it's about to what happens after people die, or a similarly disconnected subject. Also, Ryuk would have no reason to write that in it. He wanted whoever picked up the note to use it, and such a proclamation would be more likely to scare the finder against killing, instead of making them use it. Also, most if not all of the rules in the Not apply to only the owner of the Note and/or the people killed by the Note. That rule just makes me ..suspicious, I suppose the word is.
*shrug* That's fair. Though to me, what Death Note was about was a man who was so close to being a amazing fighter for Light who could have helped a lot of people, but threw it all away in the name of saving the world. So my opinion will be coloured by that. Though I'll admit, the idea of an equal afterlife appeals to me, simply because the look on Light's face when he realizes, as a friend put it, "Exactly where he is and how many people might want a brief word with him." would be farking _Hilarious_.
And I've typed it up, so I'll probably do that tonight. I may put my first, late night draft up first, and then edit it and add to it and generally spruce it up, and then post that too.
Splintered Star